I am a Year 8 student at Tamaki Primary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in the Kia Manawanui syndicate and my teachers are Mr Janse and Ms Schellingerhout.
Hello Chanel! I'm Nikita From Yaldhurst Model School, I'm quite concerned about your blog-post, my main questions would probably be. What was the purpose of this? What were you learning during this? I enjoy finding creativity, but maybe next time improve by looking over your writing for spelling mistakes, for example "Because Dinosaur are exist" By saying this would mean Dinosaurs are still living in our world, it's true that they have a habit of existing but not a habit of existing in our time.
Hello Chanel!
ReplyDeleteI'm Nikita From Yaldhurst Model School, I'm quite concerned about your blog-post, my main questions would probably be. What was the purpose of this? What were you learning during this? I enjoy finding creativity, but maybe next time improve by looking over your writing for spelling mistakes, for example "Because Dinosaur are exist" By saying this would mean Dinosaurs are still living in our world, it's true that they have a habit of existing but not a habit of existing in our time.
Otherwise great imagery,
Nikita
the purpose was for fun, what was the purpose of a negative comment? thanks though!
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